This memorable scene from the movie, Miracle, was a turning point in the movie and helped the team unite before the Olympics. The frustrated, brash, and irritated remarks of coach Herb Brooks serve as a launching pad for a leader to step up and show his courage. The threatening and wrathful voice of the coach belittles the players and some were on the verge of quitting. Coach Brooks challenges why the players are on the team as he powerfully exclaims, "The name on the front [of the jersey, USA] is a hell of a lot more important that than the one on the back [player name]!" The cruel voice of Brooks repeatedly yells, "Again!" and makes the players skate across and back the rink. As the skating continues, the harsh fury of Brooks takes its toll on the players, they are puking, hacking, and suffering. Eventually, the convincing passion in the voice of one player stands out. Mike Eruzione claims he is a member of the United States of America, the first player to not name their college team. This leadership and courage shows the elevated sincerity Eruzione showed for his team, and Coach Brooks' frustrated arrogance finally disappeared
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The poem "D-Day, A Sound Beginning" by Peter Griffin gives an explosive yet appreciative look on what D-Day was about, and the courage showed by the soldiers. The powerful recollection of "brave men dying" and "bullets flying" depict a fearful anxiety of what was going to happen next within World War II. This poem mainly focuses on the paratroopers and how "seizing objectives" and "securing causeways" helped the outcome of D-Day. The passionate joy expressed at the end of the poem conveys a calmness among the sodiers as, "The sound of freedom, allies winning/ twas the start of something great," The courageousness of the paratroopers that day as described by Griffin shows a dignified appreciation of what paratroopers did and why "Europe's freedom still survives."
The invasion of Europe, in the offing. Will we go?, will we not?, My head is spinning, stomach in knots. Boarding the plane, adjusting your gear, None of the men, showing much fear. Well briefed, we know what to expect, Engines roaring, time to reflect. Remembering home, the loved ones there, Pleasant memories, planes take to the air. Paratroopers will lead the way, The invasion of France, is underway. To catch the Germans by surprise, Airborne soldiers, will jump and die. "D-Day", has begun, Soon Hitler's armies on the run. Flying in the dark of night, The planes are bobbing left and right. Enemy guns are firing high, Tracer bullets light up the sky. June 6th, of forty four, Never have so many, "stood in the door". As the light turned from red to green, "Bill Lee", was the scream. Before I knew it, my chute was open, Planes on fire, my breath was choking. Bullets flying, brave men dying, Looking down, still hear the sounds. German soldiers running around, Buildings on fire, throughout the town. Paratroopers landing everywhere, Firing their "Thompsons", from the air. The Cherbourg Peninsula, all a drop zone, Troopers and gliders, some landing alone. Clicking their "crickets", all did regroup, Creating chaos, confusing Nazi troops. Inflicting damage, wherever they went, Enemy soldiers, forced to relent. Paratroopers were paving the way, Seizing objectives and securing causeways. To open exits for the beaches, Seaborne troops would be soon reaching. Normandy would soon be stormed, Nazi soldiers not forwarned. Caught unaware and by surprise, Enemy soldiers were quick to die. Trying hard, to hold their own, Dying Nazi's were heard to groan. Heavy fighting, brought to bear, Airborne victories were quite clear. German's couldn't counterattack, Paratroopers would cut no slack. Capturing roadways, bridges and locks, Airborne soldiers couldn't be stopped. Taking objectives as they went, Nazi resistance was badly spent. As a result of the Airborne mission, Normandy's beaches became aquisitions. H-Hour was a success, Many Nazis were laid to rest. "D-Day" opened the door, Allied victories thus assured. Cherbourg became an open port, Nazi Germany became a fort. "D-DAY, A SOUND BEGINNING!", The sound of freedom, allies winning. Twas the start of something great, Airborne soldiers, sealing Hitler's fate. The cost was high, the price was paid, Many crosses mark their graves. Paratroopers fought and died, But Europe's freedom still survives. Thank you all, for what you've done, You Airborne heroes, everyone!Peter S. GRIFFIN |
Claim:1.5 -- we thought that you didn't really show a left side, right side claim
ReplyDeleteSupport: 2 -- you did have a nice amount of quotes and we liked how you incorporated them
Discussion: 1.5 -- although you had quotes, work on discussing them more, maybe drawing some inferences
Language/Style: 2 -- you had formal language, which is great, maybe work on expanding vocab and using some more descriptive language.
you are the winner of this round.
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